mardi 24 janvier 2017

EPIC BATTLES- PROOFREADERS/EDITING HELP

I am designing a line of Tshirts depicting epic battles of history.

I have completed the first two, the first is the Battle of Cannae, and the second is the Battle of Lake Trasimene.

These shirts are intentionally simple, and not intended to be graphically nice. They are meant to only depict what I think is the point of each battle, where the loser can no longer escape or strategize, and the outcome is no longer in doubt.

What I am asking for is if I missed any important points, or if anything is too unclear to someone with a working knowledge of these battles.

BATTLE OF CANNAE TSHIRT
http://ift.tt/2jNzyt0

BATTLE OF LAKE TRASIMENE TSHIRT
http://ift.tt/2jNs09q


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