jeudi 15 août 2013

Overall Opinons on this Speculative Piece?

I'm trying to build this descriptive piece on the dangers of abuse and isolation while trying to be a realistically as possible.



The story follows follows "Fred," a quiet and abused young male who undergoes several transformations: A frightened, bulled young boy, to a cynical, manipulative and depressive teen, to a full fledged serial killer in his adult years.



This piece is obviously nsfw on several accounts and this might offend, scare or anger anyone who reads it, so you were warned before hand.



Link: http://a.storywrite.com/story/107717...ng_-by-Derchin





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